Twitteling

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Short Story: Dancing Between Order and Chaos

So...I'm thinking about submitting this story for my weekly writing challenge thingie. The problem is that I didn't get a lot of sleep last night and my head isn't on right today. Anybody want to read this and tell me if it's any good?

( Where do these things come from? I swear...sometimes I write like I have something wrong with me... )